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 Independent writing #102: Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers

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Bài gửiTiêu đề: Independent writing #102: Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers   Fri Oct 02, 2009 2:53 pm

Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Outline:
Thesis: From my point of view, schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers.
(1) By evaluating their work, teachers become more responsively.
- They have to improve their teaching method
- They have to update their knowledge frequently
- They may have to change the way communicate with their students
(2) Students learn more efficiently
- Students have chance to talk their opinion about the teacher and his teaching method
- Students suggest appropriate learning method
- Students are more interested in the subject
(3) The learning quality of school will be improved
- Allowing students evaluate their teachers improves the interaction between them
- Schools offer effective teaching methods and courses
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Bài gửiTiêu đề: Re: Independent writing #102: Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers   Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:07 pm

My comment:
1st: great main ideas
2nd: some grammar mistakes


1) By evaluating their work, teachers become more responsively. --> responsive ( after become/ feel we use adj)
- They have to improve their teaching method
- They have to update their knowledge frequently
- They may have to change the way communicate with their students
=> +/ may have to change --> have to change/ may change ( may & have to are model verbs and they stand dependently)
+/ the way communicate --> the way to communicate

(2) Students learn more efficiently
- Students have chance to talk their opinion --> give/express/have opinion about the teacher and his teaching method
- Students suggest appropriate learning method
- Students are more interested in the subject
(3) The learning quality of school will be improved
- Allowing students evaluate their teachers improves the interaction between them
=> +/ allow sb to do sth -> allow sts to evaluate
+/ evaluate their teachers improves --> and improve/ to improve

- Schools offer effective teaching methods and courses

About the usage of words, you can look up in Collocation. It is an effective guidance
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